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Thursday 7 July 2016

Persuasive writing 2016

Cell phones are the number one thing that people should not bring to school. Many students have cell phones these days. You would often see teenagers talking on their cell phones or just as often texting. It has become a part of the everyday life and a part of society.  Many teenagers and pre teenagers get cell phones as early as possible, sometimes younger than 12. So here are my reasons why we should not bring our cell phones to school.

Cell phones should not be at school because, of the distractions from the ringtones that you get from a text message or even a phone call. It will be very rude if your phone rings during an exam or even if the teacher is talking, because first of all you are not paying attention and second of all you will lose your concentration on the exam.

We shouldn’t have cell phones in class because if we were to lose our cell phones, it wouldn’t be the teacher's responsibility because it was our fault on, bringing it to school in the first place. Even though you try and ring it, It won't help because you will need like someone in all the rooms that you remember you were in, so it should stay home.

Cell phones are not to be at school because , you might say,“ I need to call my family, something came up and I have to.” What’s the point of bringing your phone when you can just ask Ms Mary in the reception , and ask for the reception’s phone. It’s not that hard.

So to sum it all up, There is an absolute 90% of children in the class that will not pay attention to the teacher ,because the children will more likely want to do their own things on the cellphones. So I recommend you to leave your cellphones at home because it might get stolen. SO LEAVE IT AT HOME!!!!

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Hi Vasa

I see you wrote a persuasive writing about why cell phones should stay at home. You story was pretty good but some paragraphs didn't make sense. Some paragraphs was talking about one thing then moved onto another. Hopefully you could go back and check it again ?

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